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    How can I submit this for review? I believe it’s finished.

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      Thanks Kat, taking a look now. It seems that the headline for the story is not really looked at until very far down. The context is important but for a news story it has to have a news angle – which is the striking. I’m happy to edit for you or if you would like to try to reorder it then that is fine also. It would mean that context is trimmed down. The news story needs to be more about the “new” than the context. If you understand.
      Cheers
      Charle

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        Thank you. That’s very helpful and I can see how the article is much better now that you’ve reordered it.

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