Talk for Story "Protests over detention in British migrant centers"

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  1. Subheading “detaining unwanted immigrants indefinitely” — no, really. The story makes it clear that migrants of undetermined status may be detained until their status is determined. “Unwanted” is unwarranted and, given it position, bias.

  2. I admit I know very little about migrant holding centers, but it seems to me there might be an opportunity for creating or partnering with local business to engage this population. They get to work and feel engaged, profits could support the cost of maintaining/improving the holding centers.

    Am I being naive?

  3. Dear Angela,
    Thank you very much for your edits and tightening of sentences. I understand this piece is very long. Can you see any areas that would be better off cut? It is long-form but I don’t want it to just be long so will be more than delighted if you wanted to cut away!

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