Investigating whether recyclable plastic straws pose allergy risk

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2018-07-20 07:15:11 ... Chet Long (talk | contribs)

Note → more concise language

2018-07-20 07:12:11 ... Chet Long (talk | contribs)

Note → thanks for catching the math mixup... as such, I've added an additional digit to the percentage for closer accuracy

2018-07-20 04:40:54 ... Leon Mintz (talk | contribs)

Note → removed duplicated word

2018-07-19 17:13:50 ... Burhan Wazir (talk | contribs)

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2018-07-19 17:07:47 ... Deleted User (talk | contribs)

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2018-07-19 16:53:23 ... Deleted User (talk | contribs)

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2018-07-19 12:26:59 ... Sam Irving (talk | contribs)

Note → Wrong maths, 0.0002 is fractional, not percentage

2018-07-19 05:22:57 ... Chet Long (talk | contribs)

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2018-07-19 05:12:49 ... Chet Long (talk | contribs)

Note → better focus - changed title and subtitle

2018-07-19 04:37:19 ... Chet Long (talk | contribs)

Note → found a much bigger angle on this story to do with Mylan and FARE as well. I also stripped out parts that hold no relevance to the decision by particular companies to use a particular product in their straws... this article is not about the overall risk of straws to the environment... (that only needs a brief mention, as has been done)... this article is about potential health risks to human consumers from corn based plastics. (A question no other outlet has actually even tried to ask.)

2018-07-19 02:49:20 ... A. U. Crawford (talk | contribs)

Note → Flattened out some verbiage to make it feel less opinionated. Added some questions to be answered to balance the information presented.

2018-07-19 01:44:57 ... Chet Long (talk | contribs)

Note → another copyedit and further things we should look at into template

2018-07-19 01:17:53 ... Chet Long (talk | contribs)

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2018-07-19 01:15:54 ... Chet Long (talk | contribs)

Note → more data for first part

2018-07-19 00:38:18 ... Chet Long (talk | contribs)

Note → moving good alternative idea to look into to proper placement in article

2018-07-19 00:36:26 ... Chet Long (talk | contribs)

Note → there is no such thing as "Corn paper straws" https://www.google.com/search?num=100&client=firefox-b-1-ab&ei=qc5PW9jfCKi3jwTAwKjYBA&q=%22corn+paper+straws%22&oq=%22corn+paper+straws%22&gs_l=psy-ab.3...13126.16008.0.16222.13.10.3.0.0.0.89.747.10.10.0....0...1c.1.64.psy-ab..0.3.229...0j0i30k1j0i10i30k1j0i7i10i30k1j0i8i7i30k1j0i8i7i10i30k1.0.DgRTa9Hd_c0 ... (so removing templated area that literally has no factual basis for being in there)

2018-07-19 00:32:47 ... Chet Long (talk | contribs)

Note → a few more changes to the templated areas for things we need in the article for a full picture

2018-07-18 22:30:35 ... Chloe Smith (talk | contribs)

Note → Added Request to look at Hemp.

2018-07-18 21:49:37 ... Chet Long (talk | contribs)

Note → first pieces of underlying story line (plus a few changes to overall template)

2018-07-18 14:26:50 ... David Weinberger (talk | contribs)

Note → How common are corn straws already? Distinguish from "normal" paper straws?

2018-07-18 14:13:59 ... David Weinberger (talk | contribs)

Note → Add info about the severity of the problem?

2018-07-17 13:54:36 ... Todd Chambers (talk | contribs)

Note → Added apostrophe to "Starbucks" for possessive