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    Hi Andrew. Many thanks for writing this article. Before we can publish it, however, please read the following post and apply the tips to your piece: https://www.wikitribune.com/project/how-to-write-a-piece-of-journalism-for-wikitribune/ For example, you might want to think of starting your piece with the most recent bit of news relevant to the subject you’re writing about. Also, please take particular care to hyperlink every assertion you make to a reliable news sources (https://www.wikitribune.com/project/sources-where-wikitribune-staff-look-first/). Finally, your piece reads more like: “Separatists’ opinions on the independence of the Judicial Power in Spain”, rather than “The independence of the Judicial Power in Spain”. Both are interesting stories, but you will need more independent and impartial information on the state of Spain’s judiciary if you are going to argue that it lacks independence. For example, have any reports been published by the European Court of Justice or international human rights (HRW, Amnesty, etc) groups about the subject? Thanks again and I really look forward to reading the updated draft. George

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      Hi George,

      Many thanks for your answer and for editing my text and getting it ready for publication. I am sorry I haven´t worked on the changes you suggested myself, but I have been super busy.

      I look forward to writing more stories and receiving your feedback.

      Thanks again,

      Andrew

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